mark_west ([info]mark_west) wrote,
@ 2009-05-27 11:45:00
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About writing
I am currently working on a novella called “The Day It Rained”, which has been sometime in the making - I have notes on the piece dating back to 2002. It has been “my next project” on a lot of occasions, always usurped by something else, but the story kept nagging at me. I make no fight about being a great artist (though I always do my very best), but I always knew that this was a good idea and that if I did it right, it could be quite a powerful piece. Maybe, in fact, that knowledge has always been what’s scared me away in the past - that it could be good but I’d screw it up somehow.

I saw a post, on the Net, from a publishing house that I like and an editor that I respect, looking for projects. Realising, in some dim and distant part of my brain, that this could be it, I wrote a teaser synopsis of the plot and sent it away and got a nibble back.

Great, now I just have to write the thing.

I didn’t refer back to the 18,000 words of notes that I’d already made, because most of the pertinent points were burned in already. As I began work, I remembered how far the gap is sometimes between what you plan and what actually comes out in the writing, but the characters were working, the situations were working and I was over-writing like mad (it’s a novella, to be about 30k words or so and I’m almost at 20k now and they haven’t even reached the smithy, where the bulk of the action takes place!).

I hadn’t realised it in the planning, but as I was writing, I could see that I needed another character. I’d already had a strong image of how this person would die, but for some reason, the words weren’t coming. I tried it from one angle, then another and I haven’t written anything since Thursday on it. But this morning, it came to me that the injuries this person receives, whilst extremely life-threatening and potentially fatal, wouldn’t mean instant death. Which would mean this character would survive for a while, in tremendous pain - what would that do to the psyche of the other siege-sufferers (is that how you say it? Or should it be siege-ees)? And that gave me the opening, for the antagonist who is already worried about his wife - this new characters cries and screams would unnerve anyone.

And so I’m off again, but this is yet another valuable lesson that I’ll doubtless forget very quickly: sometimes, if the words don’t come easily, it’s because you haven’t figured out the story turns yet. I should have learned it with “Conjure” (coming this August, just in case you’d forgotten!) - Steve, the JCB driver, just had a cameo in the notes but ended up being the third lead in the finished book.




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[info]jongibbs
2009-05-27 10:51 am UTC (link)
Sometimes, ideas need to ferment in the old brain for a while.

I wish you luck with it :)

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[info]mark_west
2009-05-27 11:36 am UTC (link)
Thanks, Jon - the thing I need to learn is that I go through this with every project and then promptly forget about it. Maybe it's a sign that I need to write more and procrastinate less!

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[info]jongibbs
2009-05-27 11:53 am UTC (link)
That applies to all of us :)

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[info]mark_west
2009-05-27 12:31 pm UTC (link)
That's very true and it's nice to be reminded every so often, if only to stop us beating ourselves up.

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[info]kiminorkey
2009-06-03 11:58 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I guess I said I missed your longer posts before I saw THIS! ha ha!

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[info]mark_west
2009-06-08 07:49 am UTC (link)
Ha!

The thing with Twitter is that I still haven't worked it out and, I'll be honest, I can't really see the point of it. I do put little comments on but I could probably never touch it again and be quite happy. Here and at my Facebook page will still be my main ports of call (and repositories of rants!).

Hope all's well with you.

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